Hi Heather, Hope you are doing well amongst all this craziness. I think you have a very good elevator pitch and cover all the important points. The only note I would make is to speak more naturally, as it comes off as if you are reading off of a script. Even if you stumble on a few words, your pitch will be more genuine and people will be able to see how much you care about your product/service.
Hi Heather! Great job on your final pitch! I like that your business idea has to do with the music industry, music is definitely one of my faves. In the beginning of your pitch, you did seem a little unnatural but you certainly seemed to loosen up more as you spoke about music and then your business more. I think it was a good idea to lay out some of the issues artists face before presenting your business as a solution. I would have liked to hear a little bit more about how your studio solves the issues but overall great job!
Hi Heather,
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Hi Heather! Great job on your final pitch! I like that your business idea has to do with the music industry, music is definitely one of my faves. In the beginning of your pitch, you did seem a little unnatural but you certainly seemed to loosen up more as you spoke about music and then your business more. I think it was a good idea to lay out some of the issues artists face before presenting your business as a solution. I would have liked to hear a little bit more about how your studio solves the issues but overall great job!
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